Welcome Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga, Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 21, 2020
Phases of the Moon
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Hi did you do this for matariki? It was a good descreption on shapes of the moon and maybe you could make the grafic qolaty better but I like it.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aotea. Do you know what each new moon phase is? Perhaps you could write a few sentences on what they mean. I like the new moon Whiro as it brings change and you can start over again. Ka pai. Keep blogging and sharing your learning.
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ReplyDeleteNice job Aotea
ReplyDeleteIts awesome that you have put in time and effort to teach people about the moon. Maybe try to put more effort into the pictures because I can see alot of holes that are exposing the backround.
i like what you have done with the phases of the moon.
ReplyDeletemaybe next time you could make the writing a little bit neater so we can understand. thank you.
Thanks sorry for this reply for being so late but it was really hard on the type of paper that i used so i tried my best but thank you for commenting on my blog.... Aotea
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