This term in literacy we have been learning how to write storys with similes and metaphor. I wrote a story on wednesday and here it is .The freezing cold wind is blowing through my lungs. Running and running when is it ever going to end? I've already ran 10000 KM. Is it never ending? My heart is pounding in my chest fear all around while hearing the screeches from my friends. I'm scared, I feel fear, I feel my heart booming in my chest over and over again. The freezing conditions put you off even more than anything else. The birds up above crying for help slip, slop’ slap the sounds of your feet hitting the ground. I heard footsteps coming up from behind so I ran as fast as I could and I was running as fast as a cheetah. I could hear the wind whispering to me your going to fast.
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